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My name is Judit Port Soler, I think my mother chose my name, becase she likes it. I'm 16 years old, and my birthday is on 25th of December, so my horoscope is Capricorn. I'm an outdoor person, in other words, I'm an extroverted person.

I live in Sant Pere Pescador, it's a little city in Girona. I am a student of 1st Batxillerat in Castelló d'Empúries, bit at the weekend I sometimes work in a restaurant with my parents. I read every day, because I think it's courious.

I have too hobbies: listening to music and singing. I do every time. My favourite sport is tennis, it's also my hobby because I do it when I'm five years old, and I love it. I also love music.

One of my ambitions would to be a better person, so that I could travel a lot all over the world, etc. To relax, I listen to classic music. I admire the artists, especially the singers.

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My name is Laila. I'm 16 years old. I'm a student at IES Castelló d'Empúries in Castelló d'Empúries.

If I don't go to school, I have to study, I watch TV, listen to music, meet my friends,... I suppose than, I'm an indoor person. I don't practise any sport.

My star sign is Libra. I usually read my horoscope. My birthday is an 5th October, in three week.

My Saturday evening is not special. I sometimes meet my friends or go to the cinema. I'm reading all books, sometimes about love stories.

I like japanese music but I also listen to other music. The people who I admire are the artists.